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Comparative Response Planning: Two Texts on Inheritance — Answers

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Comparative Response Planning: Two Texts on Inheritance — Answers

Part A: First comparisons

Circle the best answer.

1.What do both texts suggest is most truly inherited from family?
  1. AMoney and property
  2. BHabits and gestures that appear without being chosen
  3. CMusical talent
  4. DFamily arguments

Answer: Habits and gestures that appear without being chosen

Text A's narrator inherits her father's whistling; Text B's speaker inherits folding letters and standing at windows. Both set these habits above possessions.

2.How does Text B open?
  1. AWith a question
  2. BWith a list of what was not inherited
  3. CWith dialogue
  4. DWith a description of the grandmother's face

Answer: With a list of what was not inherited

'Not the house ... Not the ring' clears away material inheritance first, so the small habits that follow seem more precious by contrast.

3.The narrator's attitude to the whistling in Text A changes from:
  1. Apride to embarrassment
  2. Bresentment to acceptance and tenderness
  3. Cfear to anger
  4. Dindifference to curiosity

Answer: resentment to acceptance and tenderness

As a child she hated the sound 'with a purity only a ten-year-old can manage'; at the end she whistles again because her daughter asks.

4.Which statement best describes a key difference in form?
  1. AText A is a poem; Text B is prose
  2. BText A is a continuous first-person narrative with a time shift; Text B is a free-verse catalogue built on negation and listing
  3. CBoth are sonnets
  4. DText A uses dialogue throughout; Text B uses none

Answer: Text A is a continuous first-person narrative with a time shift; Text B is a free-verse catalogue built on negation and listing

Text A tells a story across two moments in time; Text B lists and reflects without a narrative sequence.

5.Which connective best introduces a difference between the texts?
  1. ASimilarly,
  2. BLikewise,
  3. CWhereas
  4. DIn the same way,

Answer: Whereas

'Whereas' sets up a contrast within one sentence. The other three signal similarity.

6.An integrated comparative paragraph:
  1. Adiscusses Text A fully, then Text B fully
  2. Bmoves between both texts throughout, comparing them point by point
  3. Cdiscusses only the better text
  4. Dlists techniques from each text without explaining them

Answer: moves between both texts throughout, comparing them point by point

Integrated comparison weaves the texts together in each paragraph, which keeps the focus on the relationship between them.

Part B: Build the comparison grid

Copy the grid headings (Idea / Text A / Text B / Similar or different?) onto a page, or answer each row below. Use short quotations.

7.Grid row 1, central idea: What does each text suggest about inheritance? Then write S (similar) or D (different) and explain.[2 marks]

Answer: Text A: inheritance can be unwanted, even resented, yet it becomes a source of comfort and connection across generations. Text B: what we inherit is small, unchosen and revealing, and it arrives whether we want it or not. S (mostly): both value inherited habits over possessions and stress that they are not chosen; D in emphasis: A ends in acceptance, B in a more uneasy recognition ('Nobody asks').

8.Grid row 2, form and structure: How is each text organised, and what is the effect?[2 marks]

Answer: Text A: two paragraphs, past then present, so a childhood memory is answered by an adult moment; the structure enacts the repetition of the habit across generations. Text B: a catalogue that begins with negation ('Not ... Not ...') then lists inherited habits; the movement from big possessions to small gestures reorders what counts as valuable. D: narrative sequence versus reflective list.

9.Grid row 3, voice: Describe the speaker's voice in each text.[2 marks]

Answer: Text A: a confessional first-person adult narrator, wry and self-aware ('with a purity only a ten-year-old can manage'), whose voice softens at the end. Text B: a reflective, slightly dry lyric voice with flashes of humour ('out of spite or love') and a quiet, almost resigned tone ('Nobody asks'). S: both intimate and first person; D: A tells a story, B meditates.

10.Grid row 4, key image: Choose one central image from each text and explain what it represents.[2 marks]

Answer: Text A: the whistle, 'a loose thread of one, four or five notes that went up and never came down', represents worry that is never resolved, and later love. Text B: the hand 'flat against the glass / as if the weather could be calmed like an animal' represents an inherited wish to soothe what cannot be controlled. S: both are bodily habits that express anxiety and care.

11.Grid row 5, endings: Compare how each text ends.[2 marks]

Answer: Text A ends with action: 'Then, because she asked me to, I started again.' The habit is chosen and passed on willingly, giving warmth and resolution. Text B ends with a simile, 'like rain through a roof you thought was sound', suggesting inheritance exposes weaknesses we did not know we had. D: A resolves into acceptance; B leaves an image of exposure and inevitability.

12.Write a comparative thesis (one or two sentences) that states both a similarity and a difference.[3 marks]

Answer: Model: Both 'The Tune' and 'What My Grandmother Left' suggest that our deepest inheritance lies in small, unchosen habits rather than possessions; however, while the prose extract moves from resentment to a tender acceptance of what is passed on, the poem treats inheritance with a more uneasy wonder, as something that arrives whether we are ready or not.

Part C: A model comparative paragraph

Question: Compare how the two texts present the inheritance of habits.

Model paragraph: Both texts present inherited habits as more powerful than material possessions, yet they differ in how willingly their speakers accept them. The poem makes this hierarchy explicit through its structure, dismissing 'the house' and 'the ring' in its opening negations before turning to what the grandmother 'left me', which 'was smaller'. However, the prose extract reaches the same idea through narrative, as the father's whistling, once heard 'in hospital corridors' and hated by the child, reappears in the adult narrator without her knowledge. Whereas the poem's speaker seems to observe these inherited habits with a cool curiosity, the narrator of 'The Tune' is caught off guard: 'I hadn't known I was.' By contrast with the poem's resigned 'Nobody asks', the extract ends with a choice, as the narrator 'started again' because her daughter wanted her to, turning an inherited sign of fear into an act of comfort. Similarly, both texts use the body as the site of inheritance, a whistle in one and a hand 'flat against the glass' in the other, suggesting that family lives on in gesture rather than in objects. While the poem leaves readers with the unsettling image of rain coming 'through a roof you thought was sound', the extract offers reassurance that what we inherit can be reshaped by love.

13.In the model paragraph below, underline or list three comparative connectives.[1 mark]

Answer: Any three: 'Both', 'However', 'whereas', 'By contrast', 'Similarly', 'While'.

14.How does the model paragraph avoid simply describing one text and then the other?[2 marks]

Answer: It makes a comparative claim in the topic sentence, then moves between the texts within sentences ('whereas', 'By contrast'), pairing evidence from each to support one idea at a time. The final sentence judges the difference in effect, rather than summarising each text separately.

Part D: Write your comparative paragraph

15.Using your grid, write your own integrated comparative paragraph (8–10 sentences) in response to: Compare how the two texts use imagery to explore what is passed between generations.[10 marks]

Model answer: Both texts use small, physical images to suggest that what passes between generations is felt in the body before it is understood. In 'The Tune', the father's whistle is described as 'a loose thread of one, four or five notes that went up and never came down', an image of unfinished sound that captures worry which is never resolved. Similarly, the poem's image of a hand held 'flat against the glass' presents an inherited gesture of anxious care, while the simile 'as if the weather could be calmed like an animal' reveals the impossible hope behind it. However, the texts differ in where these images lead. Whereas the extract's thread of sound is picked up by the narrator in her daughter's room, linking three generations in one tune, the poem's images remain solitary, performed at a window or over a letter 'before I have decided what to say'. The poem's closing simile of rain coming 'through a roof you thought was sound' turns inheritance into something that exposes hidden weakness. By contrast, the extract transforms its central image: the whistle that once 'leaked' fear becomes, when the daughter asks for it, a sound of reassurance. Through these contrasting trajectories, the extract suggests that inherited habits can be reclaimed and given new meaning, while the poem presents them as quiet inevitabilities we can only recognise, not refuse.

Success criteria:

  • Comparative topic sentence that states a similarity and/or difference in imagery
  • Integrated structure: moves between texts throughout, not text A then text B
  • At least two short, accurate quotations from each text
  • Explains the effect of each image, not just its meaning
  • Precise comparative connectives (similarly, whereas, by contrast, while)
  • Concluding sentence weighs the difference in effect or message
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