Adding Extra Information with Commas, Dashes and Parentheses — Answers
Answer sheet with model answers and success criteria for the Year 7 punctuation worksheet.
Adding Extra Information with Commas, Dashes and Parentheses — Answers
Part A: Find the extra information
Parenthesis is extra information placed inside a sentence. The sentence still makes sense if you take it out. Write the extra information from each sentence.
Answer: who lives on a farm
Answer: which was built over a hundred years ago
Answer: a former zookeeper
Answer: as I suspected
Part B: Which is correct?
Remember: parenthesis always needs a pair of commas, dashes or parentheses.
- AOur dog a scruffy terrier, loves the park.
- BOur dog, a scruffy terrier, loves the park.
- COur dog, a scruffy terrier loves the park.
Answer: Our dog, a scruffy terrier, loves the park.
Extra information needs a pair of commas: one before and one after.
- AThe castle — built over six hundred years ago is still standing.
- BThe castle built — over six hundred years ago — is still standing.
- CThe castle — built over six hundred years ago — is still standing.
Answer: The castle — built over six hundred years ago — is still standing.
The dashes must go around the whole piece of extra information.
- AJamal (my best friend) won the prize.
- BJamal (my best friend won the prize.)
- C(Jamal my best friend) won the prize.
Answer: Jamal (my best friend) won the prize.
Only the extra information goes inside the parentheses.
- AThe museum, which opens at nine is free on Sundays.
- BThe museum, which opens at nine, is free on Sundays.
- CThe museum which, opens at nine, is free on Sundays.
Answer: The museum, which opens at nine, is free on Sundays.
Remove the words between the commas: The museum is free on Sundays. It still makes sense.
Part C: Choose the best punctuation
All three are correct, but each one creates a slightly different effect.
- Aa pair of commas
- Ba pair of dashes
- Ca pair of parentheses
Answer: a pair of dashes
Dashes make the extra information stand out and add emphasis.
- Aa pair of commas
- Ba pair of dashes
- Ca pair of parentheses
Answer: a pair of parentheses
Parentheses make information feel like a side note.
- Aa pair of commas
- Ba pair of dashes
- Ca pair of parentheses
Answer: a pair of commas
Commas are the most natural, least interrupting choice.
Part D: Add extra information
Place the extra information straight after the noun it describes.
Answer: My great-grandmother, who is ninety, still swims every morning.
Answer: The storm — the strongest in years — knocked out power across the city.
Answer: I found my old backpack (a red one with a broken strap) in the garage.
Answer: For example: The volcano, which had been quiet for fifty years, erupted last night.
Part E: Your turn
Model answer: My uncle, who works as a chef, makes the best pancakes in the world. His kitchen — always packed with pots, jars and herbs — smells amazing. He keeps one secret ingredient (a pinch of cinnamon) in a tiny tin on the top shelf.
Success criteria:
- Three complete sentences
- One pair of commas used correctly
- One pair of dashes used correctly
- One pair of parentheses used correctly
- Each sentence makes sense without the extra information
Marking tips
- Give credit for correct method even when the final answer slips — the working shows where the thinking went right.
- For open-ended tasks, use the success criteria as a checklist rather than looking for one "right" answer.
- Celebrate what went well first, then pick one thing to work on next.
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