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Story Openings That Hook the Reader — Answers

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Story Openings That Hook the Reader — Answers

Part A: Name the hook

A hook is an opening that grabs the reader and makes them want to read on. Circle the type of hook each opening uses.

1."Don't open that box," Grandpa said, without looking up from his newspaper.
  1. Adialogue
  2. Baction
  3. Ca question
  4. Da surprising statement
  5. Esetting description

Answer: dialogue

The story starts with a character speaking, and the warning makes us wonder what is in the box.

2.The ladder wobbled, tipped and crashed into the pool, taking Theo with it.
  1. Adialogue
  2. Baction
  3. Ca question
  4. Da surprising statement
  5. Esetting description

Answer: action

The story begins in the middle of something happening, so the reader is pulled straight into the scene.

3.Have you ever wondered what your dog does while you are at school?
  1. Adialogue
  2. Baction
  3. Ca question
  4. Da surprising statement
  5. Esetting description

Answer: a question

A question speaks directly to the reader and makes them want to know the answer.

4.On the morning of her twelfth birthday, Priya discovered that she could hear what plants were thinking.
  1. Adialogue
  2. Baction
  3. Ca question
  4. Da surprising statement
  5. Esetting description

Answer: a surprising statement

The unexpected detail makes the reader ask how and why, so they keep reading.

5.Fog rolled off the river and swallowed the lamp posts one by one, until the whole street was a smudge of pale light.
  1. Adialogue
  2. Baction
  3. Ca question
  4. Da surprising statement
  5. Esetting description

Answer: setting description

The vivid setting creates a mysterious mood before any character appears.

Part B: Judge the opening

6.Which opening is the least effective?
  1. AThe phone rang at three in the morning.
  2. BI woke up, got out of bed, brushed my teeth and had breakfast.
  3. CNobody in our town had ever seen the old lighthouse lit, until last Tuesday.
  4. D"Run!" Kai yelled.

Answer: I woke up, got out of bed, brushed my teeth and had breakfast.

Waking up and following a morning routine is a very common, slow start. Nothing happens to make the reader curious.

7.What questions does this opening make the reader ask? "Nobody in our town had ever seen the old lighthouse lit, until last Tuesday."

Answer: Who lit the lighthouse? Why was it dark for so long? What happened last Tuesday? (Any two sensible questions.) A good hook makes the reader ask questions that only the story can answer.

8.Why is "Run!" Kai yelled. an effective opening even though it is only three words?

Answer: It drops the reader into a moment of danger. We do not know what Kai is running from, so we read on to find out. Short openings can create urgency.

Part C: Fix the opening

Avoid opening with a list of facts about the narrator or with waking up. Drop the reader into the story instead.

9.Revise this flat opening so that it starts with action: "My name is Sam and I am twelve. I live with my family. This is the story of the day I got lost in the forest."

Answer: Model: Sam pushed through another wall of ferns and stopped. The path was gone. Behind him, the trees looked exactly the same in every direction. (Any opening that begins in the middle of the action is correct.)

10.Revise the same opening so that it starts with dialogue.

Answer: Model: "I'm sure the path was right here," Sam muttered, turning in a slow circle. Only the birds answered. (Any opening that begins with speech that hints at the problem is correct.)

11.Revise this opening so that it uses setting to create a mood: "It was a scary night."

Answer: Model: Wind howled through the broken fence, and the single streetlight flickered on and off as if it were trying to send a warning. (Any opening that shows rather than names the scary mood is correct.)

Part D: Your turn

12.Your turn: choose one story idea: (a) a student finds a key that does not fit any lock at home; (b) a power cut leaves a family in the dark during a storm; (c) a new student arrives who seems to know everyone's secrets. Write three different openings (2–3 sentences each) using three different hooks. Name each hook, then circle the opening you think is strongest and explain why in one sentence.

Model answer: Idea (a). Dialogue: "Where did you find this?" Gran asked, holding the brass key up to the light. Her voice had gone very quiet. Action: Jamie tried the key in the front door, the back door and the garden shed. It did not fit any of them, but every time he held it, it felt slightly warm. Surprising statement: The key arrived in an envelope with no stamp, no address and my name written in my own handwriting. Strongest: The surprising statement, because it raises the biggest question: how could someone else have my handwriting?

Success criteria:

  • Three distinct openings for the same story idea
  • Three different hooks, each correctly named
  • Each opening raises a question or creates curiosity
  • Avoids slow starts such as waking up or listing facts about the narrator
  • A clear reason is given for the strongest opening
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