Shades of Meaning: Choosing Precise Synonyms — Answers
Answer sheet with model answers and success criteria for the Year 9 vocabulary worksheet.
Shades of Meaning: Choosing Precise Synonyms — Answers
Part A: Turn up the volume
Synonyms often differ in intensity. Write each set in order from weakest to strongest.
Answer: irritated, annoyed, angry, furious
- Irritated and annoyed are close; either order for the first two is accepted.
Answer: mild, warm, hot, scorching
Answer: content, happy, delighted, ecstatic
Answer: little or small, then tiny, then microscopic. (Little and small are close in intensity; either order is accepted.)
Part B: Choose the precise word
Synonyms can also differ in manner (how something is done) and formality. Circle the best word.
- Astrolled
- Btrudged
- Cskipped
- Dmarched
Answer: trudged
Trudged suggests slow, heavy, tired steps, which fits exhausted walkers.
- Astrolled
- Btrudged
- Cstormed
- Dstaggered
Answer: strolled
Strolled suggests a relaxed, unhurried walk.
- Awandered
- Btiptoed
- Cstormed
- Dambled
Answer: stormed
Stormed suggests anger and force.
- Abellowed
- Bwhispered
- Cannounced
- Dshrieked
Answer: whispered
Whispered fits the need to stay quiet.
- Achuckled
- Bsmirked
- Chowled
- Dsniggered
Answer: howled
Howled shows loud, uncontrollable laughter, matching the slapstick moment.
- Agrab
- Bpick up
- Cpurchase
- Dget
Answer: purchase
Purchase suits formal writing such as reports and letters.
Part C: Banish vague words
Replace the vague word with a more precise one that suits the context.
Answer: sobbed
Any word that shows crying or distress is correct: sobbed, wept, whimpered.
Answer: roared
Any word that suggests speed and noise is correct: roared, zoomed, sped, flashed.
Answer: breathtaking
Any precise, vivid adjective is correct: breathtaking, spectacular, magnificent.
Answer: dilapidated
Any precise word that suggests decay is correct: dilapidated, run-down, crumbling.
Part D: Revise for precision
Answer: Model: The storm was ferocious. The wind howled through the trees and the rain hammered on the roof. The dog stared at the window and whimpered. (Any precise, well-chosen replacements are correct.)
Answer: Slim has a positive connotation, suggesting someone is attractive or healthy. Skinny can sound negative, suggesting someone is too thin. Choosing between them changes how the reader feels about the person.
Part E: Your turn
Model answer: Calm: The crowd drifted out of the stadium into the warm evening. Families ambled towards the bus stops, chatting about the game, and children skipped ahead. Tense: The crowd surged out of the stadium into the dark evening. Families pushed towards the bus stops, shouting over the noise, and children clutched their parents' hands.
Success criteria:
- Two descriptions of the same moment
- First description creates a calm mood
- Second description creates a tense mood
- Synonyms chosen precisely for intensity and manner
- Changed words underlined
Marking tips
- Give credit for correct method even when the final answer slips — the working shows where the thinking went right.
- For open-ended tasks, use the success criteria as a checklist rather than looking for one "right" answer.
- Celebrate what went well first, then pick one thing to work on next.