Planning an Argumentative Essay: TEEL, Counter-Argument and Rebuttal — Answers
Answer sheet with model answers and success criteria for the 9th Grade persuasive writing worksheet.
Planning an Argumentative Essay: TEEL, Counter-Argument and Rebuttal — Answers
Part A: The contention
Your contention is the main position your whole essay argues. It appears in the introduction and is reinforced in every paragraph.
- ALanguages are interesting.
- BThis essay will talk about whether languages should be compulsory.
- CLearning a second language should be compulsory for all secondary students because it builds communication skills, cultural understanding and future opportunities.
- DSome people like languages and some people don't.
Answer: Learning a second language should be compulsory for all secondary students because it builds communication skills, cultural understanding and future opportunities.
A strong contention takes a clear side and previews the main reasons. The others are vague, announce the topic, or sit on the fence.
- AEvery student should learn a second language.
- BLanguage study should remain optional, so students can focus on subjects that match their interests and goals.
- CLanguages help students understand other cultures.
- DSpanish is spoken in many countries.
Answer: Language study should remain optional, so students can focus on subjects that match their interests and goals.
It argues against compulsory language study and gives a reason.
Answer: For example (against): "While learning a language has real benefits, it should not be compulsory, because students learn best when they choose subjects that suit their interests, and timetables are already crowded."
Part B: Anatomy of a TEEL body paragraph
Read the model body paragraph and circle the job each numbered sentence does.
Issue: Should learning a second language be compulsory for all secondary students?
(1) Learning a second language should be compulsory because it allows young people to communicate with a far wider range of people. (2) In a world where people travel, study and work across borders more than ever, the ability to speak even a little of another language opens doors that would otherwise stay closed. (3) For example, a student who learns Spanish can hold basic conversations with people in Spain and across much of Central and South America, while a student who learns Mandarin can speak with hundreds of millions of people in China and in communities around the world. (4) Making language study compulsory ensures that every student, not just those who already have the opportunity, gains this valuable skill.
(Model paragraph written for this worksheet.)
- Atopic sentence
- Bexplanation
- Cevidence or example
- Dlink
Answer: topic sentence
It states the paragraph's argument and links it to the contention.
- Atopic sentence
- Bexplanation
- Cevidence or example
- Dlink
Answer: explanation
It explains why the argument matters.
- Atopic sentence
- Bexplanation
- Cevidence or example
- Dlink
Answer: evidence or example
"For example" introduces specific evidence to support the argument.
- Atopic sentence
- Bexplanation
- Cevidence or example
- Dlink
Answer: link
It links the paragraph back to the contention: that language study should be compulsory.
Answer: Point, Evidence (or Elaboration), Explanation, Link. Like TEEL, it opens with the main idea, supports it, explains it and links back to the contention.
Part C: Counter-argument and rebuttal
Strong argumentative essays do not ignore the other side. They acknowledge it and then show why their own position is stronger.
- counter-argument
- concession
- rebuttal
- contention
- explaining why the opposing argument is weaker than it first appears
- an argument the other side would make against your contention
- the overall position your essay argues
- admitting that part of the opposing view has some merit
Answer: counter-argument → an argument the other side would make against your contention; concession → admitting that part of the opposing view has some merit; rebuttal → explaining why the opposing argument is weaker than it first appears; contention → the overall position your essay argues
- AThat is wrong.
- BTime is important, but languages are more important than everything else.
- CIt is true that timetables are busy; however, language study can be built in gradually, for example a few lessons a week, and the skills it develops, such as memory and close attention to grammar, support learning in other subjects too.
- DStudents should just stay at school longer.
Answer: It is true that timetables are busy; however, language study can be built in gradually, for example a few lessons a week, and the skills it develops, such as memory and close attention to grammar, support learning in other subjects too.
A strong rebuttal concedes the valid point, then offers a reasoned response. Simply saying the other side is wrong is not persuasive.
Answer: For example: "Understanding other cultures is certainly valuable; however, it can also be developed through history, geography, literature and travel, without forcing every student into a subject that may not suit them."
Part D: Plan your essay
Plan for or against. A sample plan for the "for" side is on the answer sheet. Order your arguments so your strongest comes last, just before the rebuttal.
Answer: Hook: "Imagine arriving in a new country and being unable to ask for directions." Background: Language study is compulsory in some schools and optional in others. Contention: Learning a second language should be compulsory because it builds communication, cultural understanding and future opportunities.
Answer: Topic sentence: A second language lets students communicate with many more people. Evidence: languages such as Spanish and Mandarin are spoken by large numbers of people across many countries.
Answer: Topic sentence: Learning a language builds understanding of other cultures. Evidence: language lessons include customs, food, festivals and ways of thinking, helping students see the world from another perspective.
Answer: Topic sentence: Language skills open up future study and career opportunities. Example: jobs in tourism, international business, diplomacy and translation can value people who speak more than one language.
Answer: Counter-argument: timetables are already crowded. Rebuttal: concede that time is limited, but argue that even a few lessons a week build useful skills, and that language study strengthens skills used in other subjects.
Answer: Restate that learning a second language is a skill for life that every student deserves. Final thought: return to the hook: "Next time someone in a new country asks you for directions, wouldn't you like to be able to answer?"
Part E: Draft
Model answer: Learning a second language should be compulsory because it helps students understand cultures other than their own. Language and culture are closely linked, so learning how another group of people speaks also means learning how they live, celebrate and see the world. For example, students learning Japanese often study the customs of greeting and politeness that shape everyday conversation, while students learning French may explore the food, festivals and history of French-speaking countries. These experiences encourage curiosity and respect rather than suspicion of people who are different. In a diverse society, this kind of understanding is not a luxury but a necessity. Making language study compulsory ensures that every student, not only those who choose it, develops this open-minded perspective.
Success criteria:
- Topic sentence clearly states one argument linked to the contention
- Explanation develops the reasoning behind the argument
- Specific, accurate evidence or example (no invented statistics)
- Link sentence returns to the contention
- Formal, persuasive tone with linking language
Model answer: Some argue that students already study too many subjects and that adding a compulsory language would leave less time for core areas such as English and mathematics. It is true that school timetables are busy, and time spent on one subject is time not spent on another. However, language study does not need to take over the timetable; even a few lessons a week can build useful skills over several years. Moreover, learning a language strengthens skills that support other subjects, such as memory, careful listening and an understanding of how grammar works. Rather than competing with other subjects, a second language can help students succeed in them.
Success criteria:
- States the counter-argument fairly and clearly
- Uses a concession ("It is true that...", "Admittedly...")
- Rebuttal gives a reasoned response, not just disagreement
- Ends by reinforcing the contention
- Uses contrastive linking words (however, nevertheless, moreover)
Marking tips
- Give credit for correct method even when the final answer slips — the working shows where the thinking went right.
- For open-ended tasks, use the success criteria as a checklist rather than looking for one "right" answer.
- Celebrate what went well first, then pick one thing to work on next.
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