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Poetry Analysis: Imagery, Tone, Structure and Rhythm — Answers

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Poetry Analysis: Imagery, Tone, Structure and Rhythm — Answers

Part A: Imagery and figurative language

1.'His shop is narrow as a held breath' is an example of:
  1. Ametaphor
  2. Bsimile
  3. Conomatopoeia
  4. Dalliteration

Answer: simile

It compares the shop to a held breath using 'as', so it is a simile.

2.'a lamp's small sun' is best described as:
  1. Aa metaphor
  2. Ba simile
  3. Chyperbole
  4. Da rhetorical question

Answer: a metaphor

The lamp is called a 'sun' without 'like' or 'as': a metaphor. It suggests the lamp is the centre of his small world.

3.'Buses sigh at corners' uses:
  1. Apersonification
  2. Bsimile
  3. Crhyme
  4. Drepetition

Answer: personification

Buses cannot sigh; the human action suggests weariness (and imitates the hiss of air brakes).

4.'Phones flash and flare' uses:
  1. Aassonance only
  2. Balliteration
  3. Ca simile
  4. Dan oxymoron

Answer: alliteration

The repeated 'f' sound is alliteration; the quick, sharp sounds suit the restless city.

5.Explain the effect of the simile 'springs as fine as hair'.

Answer: It emphasises how tiny and delicate the parts are, and therefore how skilful, careful and patient the repairer must be.

6.The poem twice describes the inside of a clock as a 'heart'. What does this metaphor suggest about the clocks and about the repairer?

Answer: It makes the clocks seem alive, so a broken clock is like a sick creature and the repairer is like a doctor or healer who brings it back to life ('remembers how to beat'). It shows how much care and tenderness he brings to his work.

Part B: Tone

7.Which word best describes the poet's tone towards the clock repairer?
  1. Amocking
  2. Badmiring and tender
  3. Cangry
  4. Dindifferent

Answer: admiring and tender

The poet presents his patience as 'the gift that no one else will spare' and gives him a calm, dignified exit; the tone is quietly admiring.

8.How is the tone of stanza 3 ('Outside, the city hurries') different from the stanzas around it? How is the difference created?

Answer: Stanza 3 is restless and hurried, while stanzas 2 and 4 are calm and focused. The difference comes from short, clipped sentences, verbs of rapid movement and light ('hurries', 'flash and flare') and the blunt repetition of 'Nobody', compared with the slow, careful verbs ('bends', 'lifting', 'gives') used for the repairer.

9.What attitude does the poet seem to have towards the city? Quote one phrase to support your answer.

Answer: The poet seems gently critical of the city's rush and impatience. For example, the street is 'late for something' (it hurries without knowing why), and 'Nobody has a minute. Nobody stops.'

Part C: Structure

10.How is the poem organised?
  1. AFour rhyming couplets
  2. BSeven three-line stanzas (tercets) with no regular rhyme scheme
  3. CA sonnet of fourteen lines
  4. DOne long unbroken stanza

Answer: Seven three-line stanzas (tercets) with no regular rhyme scheme

There are seven stanzas of three lines. A few words rhyme (hair, flare, spare) but there is no regular pattern.

11.Stanzas 3 and 4 begin 'Outside' and 'Inside'. What is the effect of this structural choice?

Answer: It sets up a clear contrast between the hurried world outside and the patient world inside the shop. Placing the two side by side makes the repairer's calm seem even more unusual and valuable.

12.Stanza 4 ends 'an hour, and then another hour,' and the sentence runs on into stanza 5. What is this technique called, and what is its effect here?

Answer: Enjambment (here across a stanza break). The sentence carries on past the end of the stanza, so the reader experiences time stretching on, just as the repairer keeps working hour after hour until the clock is fixed.

13.Why might the poet have ended stanza 6 with the line 'He locks the door and does not run.'?

Answer: It shows that the repairer stays calm even when he steps out into the rushing street. 'Does not run' sets him apart from the city that is 'late for something' and shows that patience is part of who he is, not just how he works.

Part D: Rhythm and sound

14.Say the line 'a hundred mended hearts tick on' aloud and mark the stressed syllables. Describe the rhythm and explain why it suits the poem.

Answer: a HUN-dred MEND-ed HEARTS tick ON: four regular beats, each an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed one (iambic). The steady, even beat imitates the ticking of clocks and a calm heartbeat, matching the idea of patience and steadiness.

15.Compare the rhythm of 'Nobody has a minute. Nobody stops.' with 'until the stubborn wheels agree'. What difference do you notice, and why?

Answer: 'until the stubborn wheels agree' has a smooth, regular da-DUM rhythm, like a clock working properly. 'Nobody has a minute. Nobody stops.' is irregular and broken by a full stop, so it sounds jerky and rushed, matching the hurried city.

16.The final line is longer than most other lines and is slowed by commas: 'patient, steady, in no hurry at all.' What is the effect?

Answer: The commas force the reader to pause and the long line takes time to read, so the poem itself slows down at the end. The sound matches the meaning: the poem finishes in the same unhurried way the repairer lives.

Part E: Key terms

17.Match each poetic term to its meaning.
  • tercet
  • enjambment
  • tone
  • imagery
  • rhythm
  • language that creates pictures or sensations in the reader's mind
  • a sentence or phrase that runs on past the end of a line or stanza
  • the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables
  • a stanza of three lines
  • the poet's attitude towards the subject

Answer: tercet → a stanza of three lines; enjambment → a sentence or phrase that runs on past the end of a line or stanza; tone → the poet's attitude towards the subject; imagery → language that creates pictures or sensations in the reader's mind; rhythm → the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables

Part F: Analyse and create

18.Write an analytical paragraph (7–9 sentences) answering: How does the poet use contrast to present the value of patience? Refer to imagery, structure and rhythm, quoting the poem.

Model answer: The poet uses contrast between the shop and the city to present patience as rare and valuable. The repairer is introduced through calm, delicate imagery: he bends 'beneath a lamp's small sun', lifting 'springs as fine as hair', which shows the care his work requires. In stanza 3 the poem abruptly turns 'Outside', where 'Buses sigh' and 'Phones flash and flare'; the alliteration and short, clipped sentences create a restless, broken rhythm. The repetition 'Nobody has a minute. Nobody stops.' suggests the city has lost something important. Stanza 4 turns back 'Inside', and the enjambment of 'an hour, and then another hour' across the stanza break makes the reader feel his patient, unhurried time. The metaphor of the 'tiny heart' that 'remembers how to beat' shows that his patience literally brings things back to life. The final line, slowed by commas, 'patient, steady, in no hurry at all', echoes the steady ticking of the clocks. Through this contrast, the poet suggests that patience is a gift worth more than the speed the city values.

Success criteria:

  • Topic sentence answers the question and names the contrast
  • Discusses imagery with accurate quotation
  • Discusses structure (for example the 'Outside'/'Inside' turn or enjambment)
  • Discusses rhythm or sound and links it to meaning
  • Explains the effect of each technique, not just its name
  • Concluding sentence states the poem's idea about patience
  • Formal analytical register; quotations embedded smoothly
19.Write one extra tercet (three lines) that could fit between stanzas 2 and 3, describing another detail of the repairer at work. Try to keep the calm tone and use at least one image.

Model answer: He hums to the cogs as if they were shy, coaxing each tooth to its neighbour, slow as a tide coming in.

Success criteria:

  • Exactly three lines
  • Calm, admiring tone consistent with the poem
  • At least one deliberate image (simile, metaphor or personification)
  • Fits logically between stanzas 2 and 3
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