Southerly — Poetry Comprehension — Answers
Answer sheet with model answers and success criteria for the Year 6 reading comprehension comprehension exercise.
Year 6 · English · Reading Comprehension
Southerly — Poetry Comprehension — Answers
Part A — Find the facts
Answer: Calm and sunny: the harbour was still ('asleep') and the water was like a mirror of blue.
Answer: The south.
Answer: It marched away north.
- Asunshine
- Ba scarf of thin snow
- Ca rainbow
- Dfog
Answer: a scarf of thin snow
The poem says 'the hills wore a scarf of thin snow'.
Part B — How the poem works
Answer: Personification gives human actions to something that is not human. The harbour is 'asleep' when the water is calm and still, then it 'wakes up with a shiver' when the wind makes the water rough.
Answer: snatched, rattled, whistled (also stretched).
Answer: White-topped waves (whitecaps). The waves move fast and wild across the harbour, like galloping horses with white manes.
Answer: 'crisp, clean' (repeated c sound). It makes the line sound sharp and clear, like the clean night air.
Answer: It starts peaceful and lazy, becomes wild and harsh during the storm, and ends calm, fresh and clear.
Part C — Poetry words
- Arhyme
- Bonomatopoeia (words that sound like the noise they describe)
- Csimiles
- Dquestions
Answer: onomatopoeia (words that sound like the noise they describe)
Both words imitate the sounds they describe.
- Asimile
- Bmetaphor
- Crhyme
- Dtitle
Answer: simile
It compares the rain to a pin using 'as'.
Part D — Your turn
Model answer: The fog crept in on padded feet, it swallowed the houses one by one, it hid the hills and hushed the street, then slowly melted in the sun.
Success criteria:
- Four lines about one kind of weather
- At least one example of personification
- At least one strong verb
- Careful word choice that helps the reader picture the weather
Marking tips
- Give credit for correct method even when the final answer slips — the working shows where the thinking went right.
- For open-ended tasks, use the success criteria as a checklist rather than looking for one "right" answer.
- Celebrate what went well first, then pick one thing to work on next.
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