Evaluating Reasoning: Logical Fallacies in an Editorial — Answers
Answer sheet with model answers and success criteria for the 10th Grade persuasive writing worksheet.
Evaluating Reasoning: Logical Fallacies in an Editorial — Answers
Part A: Identify the fallacy
Read the editorial and the key terms. Then circle the best answer.
Opinion: Later School Start? Let's Not Sleepwalk Into Disaster (original editorial written for this worksheet; the writer is fictional)
(1) The school board's proposal to move the start of the school day from 8:30 am to 9:30 am is being sold as a gift to tired teenagers. It is nothing of the kind.
(2) Supporters of the change apparently believe that young people should be allowed to drift into class whenever they feel like it, as if school were a café that opens when its customers finally wake up.
(3) Let us be clear about the choice in front of us. Either we keep the bell exactly where it is, or we raise a generation that cannot get out of bed without permission.
(4) And where would it end? If the bell moves an hour this year, next year it will move two. Then lessons will become optional, and before long students will be choosing their own marks.
(5) I put the question to a celebrated television chef, a man who has run busy kitchens for thirty years, and he was in no doubt: early starts build character. If anyone understands discipline, it is him.
(6) My own nephew tried sleeping in during his final year of school, and his marks dropped. Teenagers clearly do worse, not better, when they are given more time in bed.
(7) There is also a practical question the board has not answered. The same buses that carry secondary students also run the routes for the district's junior schools, so a later start could mean rebuilding both timetables, at a cost the board has not yet published.
(8) Keep the bell at 8:30. Our children's futures depend on it.
Key terms. Straw man: misrepresenting an opponent's view as weaker or sillier than it is, then attacking that version. False dilemma: presenting only two options when others exist. Slippery slope: claiming one step will inevitably lead to a chain of extreme consequences, without showing why. Appeal to authority (irrelevant authority): relying on someone's status rather than evidence, especially when their expertise is in a different field. Hasty generalization: drawing a broad conclusion from too few or unrepresentative examples.
- Aslippery slope
- Bstraw man
- Chasty generalization
- Dappeal to authority
Answer: straw man
The proposal is a fixed later start for everyone, not "whenever they feel like it". The writer attacks an exaggerated version of the opposing view.
- Afalse dilemma
- Bstraw man
- Cappeal to authority
- Dhasty generalization
Answer: false dilemma
Only two options are offered, and one is extreme. Many other outcomes are possible, such as a smaller change or a trial.
- Ahasty generalization
- Bappeal to authority
- Cslippery slope
- Dfalse dilemma
Answer: slippery slope
The writer claims one change will set off a chain of increasingly extreme consequences, with no evidence that any step leads to the next.
- Astraw man
- Bappeal to authority
- Cfalse dilemma
- Dslippery slope
Answer: appeal to authority
Running kitchens does not make someone an expert on adolescent sleep or learning. The writer relies on his status rather than evidence.
- Ahasty generalization
- Bslippery slope
- Cfalse dilemma
- Dstraw man
Answer: hasty generalization
One person's experience cannot show what happens to teenagers in general, and the nephew's marks may have dropped for other reasons.
- AParagraph 2
- BParagraph 4
- CParagraph 6
- DParagraph 7
Answer: Paragraph 7
Paragraph 7 identifies a real, practical consequence (bus timetables and cost) and asks for information. It is relevant, although it still needs figures to be persuasive.
Part B: Questions that test reasoning
- Straw man
- False dilemma
- Slippery slope
- Appeal to authority
- Hasty generalization
- Is this really what the other side is arguing?
- Is this sample large and typical enough to support the conclusion?
- Are these truly the only two options?
- Is this person an expert in this particular field, and what is the evidence?
- Why would the first step necessarily lead to the last?
Answer: Straw man → Is this really what the other side is arguing?; False dilemma → Are these truly the only two options?; Slippery slope → Why would the first step necessarily lead to the last?; Appeal to authority → Is this person an expert in this particular field, and what is the evidence?; Hasty generalization → Is this sample large and typical enough to support the conclusion?
Part C: Explain and repair the reasoning
Answer in full sentences.
Answer: Model: Supporters would more likely argue that a later, fixed start time could help students arrive better rested and ready to learn, because many teenagers' sleep patterns tend to shift later during adolescence.
Answer: Any two: a smaller change (for example, a 30-minute shift); a trial period at one or two schools before deciding; a later start on some days only; keeping the start time but changing homework or early activities. Any reasonable alternative is acceptable.
Answer: It is a single, unrepresentative example: one person cannot stand for all teenagers. The nephew's marks may have dropped for many other reasons (harder subjects, stress, illness), so the writer has not shown that more sleep caused the drop. A fair conclusion would need data from many students.
Answer: The actual cost of rebuilding the bus timetables (or the number of extra buses or drivers needed), how many families and schools would be affected, and whether other schools that changed their start times solved the problem. Figures from the transport provider or the board would turn a worry into evidence.
Answer: Model: Before deciding, the board should publish what education and sleep researchers have found about start times, and report how attendance and results changed at any schools that have already trialed a later bell.
Answer: It most resembles a false dilemma (or an exaggerated, slippery-slope style claim): it implies that keeping the bell at 8:30 is the only way to protect students' futures, without evidence, and ignores the many other factors that shape a student's future. It is also an emotional appeal rather than reasoning.
Part D: Evaluate the argument
Model answer: Although the editorial presents itself as common sense, its argument against a later start time relies more on logical fallacies than on evidence. The writer opens by constructing a straw man, claiming that supporters want students to "drift into class whenever they feel like it", which misrepresents a proposal for a fixed, later start and makes the opposing view easy to ridicule. This is followed by a false dilemma, in which readers must choose between keeping the bell "exactly where it is" or raising "a generation that cannot get out of bed", ignoring sensible alternatives such as a smaller change or a trial. The slippery slope in paragraph 4, which predicts that students will soon be "choosing their own marks", offers no explanation of how one change would lead to the next. Even the writer's evidence is weak: a television chef's view is an appeal to an authority with no expertise in learning or sleep, and the story of a single nephew is a hasty generalization that cannot represent teenagers as a group. The editorial's one reasonable point is the question of bus timetables, which identifies a real practical cost; however, because the writer provides no figures, it remains a concern rather than a convincing argument. Overall, the editorial may persuade readers who already agree, but a careful reader will find that its confident tone covers a lack of fair, relevant evidence.
Success criteria:
- Opens with a clear evaluative judgment about the editorial's reasoning
- Correctly names and explains at least three fallacies, with brief, accurate quotations
- Explains why each piece of reasoning fails, not just what it is called
- Acknowledges the reasonable point about buses and what it lacks
- Balanced, formal tone; evaluates the argument rather than attacking the writer
- Ends with an overall judgment linked to the question
Marking tips
- Give credit for correct method even when the final answer slips — the working shows where the thinking went right.
- For open-ended tasks, use the success criteria as a checklist rather than looking for one "right" answer.
- Celebrate what went well first, then pick one thing to work on next.
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