What you need to know
An information report gives facts about a topic. It describes a whole class of things (sharks, volcanoes, the water cycle) rather than telling one story about one event. Its purpose is to inform, not to persuade or entertain, so it is written in the present tense, in the third person, and in a formal, objective voice with no "I think" or "I reckon".
| Section | Purpose | Example (topic: the kiwi) |
|---|
| Title | Names the topic | The Kiwi |
| General statement (classification) | Says what the subject is and which group it belongs to | The kiwi is a flightless, nocturnal bird found only in New Zealand. |
| Description paragraphs with subheadings | Each paragraph covers one aspect: appearance, habitat, diet, behaviour, threats | Habitat: Kiwi live in native forest, scrub and tussock grassland… |
| Conclusion (optional) | Sums up or ends with a memorable fact | Although rarely seen, the kiwi remains one of the most unusual birds in the world. |
| Glossary and diagram | Explains technical terms; labels key features | nocturnal: active at night |
Language features. Use technical vocabulary (nocturnal, habitat, predator) and explain it in a glossary. Use the timeless present tense: "Kiwi hunt by smell", not "hunted". Use general nouns (kiwi as a species, not my kiwi) and factual adjectives (flightless, nocturnal, native) rather than opinion adjectives (cute, gross, amazing). Start each paragraph with a topic sentence that announces what the paragraph is about.
Build a paragraph from a topic sentence
- Choose the aspect for this paragraph: Diet.
- Write the topic sentence: "The kiwi is a night-time forager that finds most of its food underground."
- Add two or three supporting facts: "Unlike any other bird, it has nostrils at the tip of its long beak, which it pushes into the soil to smell worms, grubs and insect larvae. It also eats fallen fruit and seeds."
- Finish with a linking or interesting sentence: "This keen sense of smell makes the kiwi very different from most birds, which rely on sight."
Fix an informal sentence
- Draft: "I reckon kiwi are super cute and there's heaps of them in the bush near my nan's place."
- Problems: first person (I reckon), opinion adjective (super cute), a personal detail that is not a general fact (near my nan's place), and a claim that is not accurate (kiwi are now rare in most places).
- Rewrite: "Kiwi live in native forest, scrub and tussock grassland in parts of both the North and South Islands."
- Check: third person, present tense, factual, general. Done.
Planning. Research first and jot facts in your own words under subheadings. Order the sections from general to specific: classification, then appearance, then habitat, diet and so on. Write, then edit for tense and tone. Finally, check every fact against your source.
| Opinion or informal (avoid) | Factual and formal (use) |
|---|
| Sharks are really scary. | Sharks are apex predators at the top of the ocean food chain. |
| Kiwi have a weird nose. | Kiwi are the only birds with nostrils at the tip of the beak. |
| I think Aoraki is amazing. | Aoraki / Mount Cook is the highest mountain in New Zealand. |
| Volcanoes were erupting. | Volcanoes erupt when magma rises through cracks in the Earth's crust. |
Common mistake: slipping into a story or the past tense ("Last week we saw a kiwi at the sanctuary and it ran away"). An information report describes what is generally true, so it stays in the present tense and leaves out personal experiences.
Common mistake: copying sentences straight from a website or book. Read the source, close it, and write the fact in your own words. Then reopen it to check you have kept the fact accurate.
Check yourself
- What tense is an information report usually written in?
- What does the general statement (classification) at the start of a report do?
- Rewrite formally: "Tuatara are pretty cool because they're heaps old."
- Which is a factual adjective: nocturnal or adorable?
- Suggest three subheadings for an information report about the kea.
- Write a topic sentence for a paragraph about where kākāpō live today.
Answers: 1. The present tense 2. It says what the subject is and which group or class it belongs to 3. Model answer: Tuatara are reptiles whose relatives lived alongside the dinosaurs, and individuals can live for more than 100 years. 4. nocturnal 5. For example: Appearance, Habitat, Diet, Behaviour, Threats (any three) 6. Model answer: Today most kākāpō live on predator-free islands such as Whenua Hou, where they are closely monitored by rangers.